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Introducing: The Hidden Valley

UPDATE: I’ve switched back to Evinden for now. Apparently Hidden Valley is a brand of condiments in the US. Who knew!?

I’m now calling Evinden by a new name: The Hidden Valley. It’s still likely to be only a working title, as it’s rather generic, but it at least means something. While the name of the fictional continent that the story takes place upon works fine inside the text, as the actual title it doesn’t resonate at all. The Hidden Valley at least suggests certain interesting plot scenarios.

Editing has commenced, with much useful feedback from Axel Wilkinson and James Harvey feeding into the second draft. There’s a ton of work to do on every level: structural, plot, characters, dialogue. It’s going to take probably the rest of the year, but it’s hugely exciting to be working on it again.

The first thing I’m doing is adding some backstory elements to the start of each chapter, in the form of Asimov-style encyclopedia entries, or newspaper cuttings, or similar. They help to flesh out the world without having to dump exposition into the main story/dialogue.

Other projects are coming along nicely too, but more on them another time.

Hey, remember those books?

So 2010 turned out to be a bit of a weird one for my writing, with the Arms Race short film rather taking over all my spare creative time. That turned out great but by the time it premiered back in November it was absolutely time to get back to doing what I love the most: writing.

Another It’s A Trap! project was gearing up just as Arms Race was winding down, namely the audio drama The Ravenskil Chronicles. Most easily (an inaccurately) described as a 1920s-set X-Files, it’s from the same people that made Jack Steel such a pulpy success but with a very different remit. The most noticeable change in approach is to have a team of writers, rather than Chris Burdett writing every episode.

As such, I’m penning episode 3 and have thoroughly enjoyed doing so. The first draft was completed just before Christmas and I’ve now completed the second, which is much more trim with a lot of fat removed and dialogue tweaked. There will doubtless be a third draft following some more feedback, and once the other scripts start to come together there will be a process of getting them all in sync.

Meanwhile, I’ve also started work once more on Of Rock And Earth – it’s so nearly finished in first draft form. Once that’s done I can go back to Evinden and – fainlly, at long last – get it into a publishable state.

While other projects will no doubt appear during 2011, I’m determined to keep it as primarily a ‘year of writing’. A few mini-test films wouldn’t go amiss, but major projects are out of bounds until I’ve got these two books finished.

More on all three projects (Ravenskil, Of Rock And Earth and Evinden) as they progress.

Hope you all had a good Christmas. I certainly did. :)

Evinden – first feedback

You may remember that when I’m not ranting about the Digital Economy Bill, I like to spend my time writing. Late last year I finished the first draft of my first novel, Evinden, and this weekend I received a response from the first person to read the book in its entirety.

The comments were courtesy of Axel Wilkinson and were largely very positive, which is hugely exciting. It’s only one person and one opinion, of course, but I think my relationship with Axel is of a sort whereby he would feel able to be honest and not sugar coat his thoughts. More importantly he also included a range of suggestions, all of which are superb. They’re mostly small things which have a big impact – such as re-using a prop from earlier in the story in the climax, or extending certain sequences, bridging others…all of which will add up to a major improvement.

I had written more, but this laptop’s internet connection is all over the place, so I will adjourn for today.

Arms Race

I’ve begun work editing Arms Race, the steampunk period peace set during an alternative Crimean War directed by my friend Nigel Clegg. We shot it last summer out in the wilds of Norfolk. So far it’s being kept under wraps, so that we don’t spoil the nifty set, costumes and miniatures we’ve got going on.

I was cinematographer during the shoot, which was quite a challenge given that I don’t really have any formal training. While I think I’m a decent cameraman and can work our HVX-200 nicely, and know how to frame a shot, I’m by no means a lighting man. This didn’t matter hugely given the micro-budget of the film and the location shoot, which rather limited how much control we had over such things. The weather played silly buggers all day, with the sun popping in and out of clouds every twenty minutes. It makes or some rather mis-matched footage, but hopefully nothing we can’t fix with a spot of grading magic.

Anyway, the edit hath begun: I really liked editing. It’s the most creative and least stressful part of the process, demanding you think laterally to work around potential limitations with the material. It’s also where the film can be reinvented or ballsed up. It’s essentially a counterpart to the scriptwriting process: the story begins with the script and ends with editing. Everything else is technique – vital nonetheless, of course.

What else? Well, Axel Wilkinson, a long-time remote colleague and (I’d like to say) friend of mine from the States is arriving in Norwich tomorrow morning. He should be in the air right now, in fact. He’s always been one of our most supportive customers, testers and community members at FXhome, as evidence by him winning a community-voted award in 2009. Great guy and I’m really looking forward to meeting him and working with him face-to-face for the first time while he’s here on a consultancy basis next week.

Currently pondering projects: my three at the moment are Evinden, Of Rock And Earth and Arms Race. Here’s their current status:

Evinden: First draft complete, currently with Slava and Nadia for some feedback. Regardless of when that feedback arrives, I’ll be moving into the second draft as soon as my other book hits first draft…

Of Rock And Earth: Three quarters towards a first draft. Slow going due to going back to work and being distracted by the likes of Dragon Age and Uncharted 2, but I’m hoping to accelerate progress soon. Which won’t be easy once I hit February and go skiing for a week. Anyway, this is my current main priority – need to get a first draft finished so I can go back to Evinden, as well as try my hand at some short stories.

Arms Race: Edit just begun, opening sequence complete in rough form. Hope to have a VERY rough first draft by the end of next week, ready for some extreme tightening. We can then identify and start work on the VFX shots.

Busy weekend coming up, meanwhile, which is never good for creative projects: Axeman arrives, we’re out for a meal with friends on Saturday, and off to my parents on Sunday. Plus we have to fit in buying skiing equipment at some point.

Right, Nadia’s busy stabbing hurlocks (evil things in Dragon Age, not the fat guy from Lost), so I think I’ll do some novel writing!

2010: the year I write some books

2010 has somehow arrived without anybody really noticing: December itself whipped by, as did Christmas, and the next thing I knew I was at a New Year’s Eve party at which people barely acknowledged the passing of the midnight hour (it was nonetheless a superb party, aside from my awful hangover the following day).

Time, then, to set out some of the year’s goals:

- Finish Evinden. First draft is already compete, as chronicled extensively on this blog. That edition is now with Slava and Nadia for editing. I received my first feedback from Slava at the NYE party and I’m very excited to say it was lovely and positive. Then again, I do believe the lady had been drinking.

- Finish Of Rock And Earth. This is my NaNoWriMo 2009 novel, which is about 10-15k words short of completion. that will also then need a second draft, of course.

- Write short stories. I’ve a couple of short story ideas that have been buzzing around in my head for a while: this year I want to actually get them penned. Probably in-between editing the novels.

- Get published. This is the tricky one. However, I will be pursuing some kind of publishing solution for all of the above, starting with the short stories in some of the scifi fiction magazines.

Those are my major creative goals. Ideally I’d also love to work on more rewarding film projects, but the writing has to take priority. There’s also a new audio drama in the works which I sincerely hope to be involved with on a script level (and perhaps acting?).

On top of that there’s a load of personal goals I won’t go into here (not yet, at least) and work goals in taking my projects at FXhome up a notch or three.

Plus I’ll be turning 30 at some point.

I may even finish Dragon Age. Now that would really be an achievement!