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Arms Race

I’ve begun work editing Arms Race, the steampunk period peace set during an alternative Crimean War directed by my friend Nigel Clegg. We shot it last summer out in the wilds of Norfolk. So far it’s being kept under wraps, so that we don’t spoil the nifty set, costumes and miniatures we’ve got going on.

I was cinematographer during the shoot, which was quite a challenge given that I don’t really have any formal training. While I think I’m a decent cameraman and can work our HVX-200 nicely, and know how to frame a shot, I’m by no means a lighting man. This didn’t matter hugely given the micro-budget of the film and the location shoot, which rather limited how much control we had over such things. The weather played silly buggers all day, with the sun popping in and out of clouds every twenty minutes. It makes or some rather mis-matched footage, but hopefully nothing we can’t fix with a spot of grading magic.

Anyway, the edit hath begun: I really liked editing. It’s the most creative and least stressful part of the process, demanding you think laterally to work around potential limitations with the material. It’s also where the film can be reinvented or ballsed up. It’s essentially a counterpart to the scriptwriting process: the story begins with the script and ends with editing. Everything else is technique – vital nonetheless, of course.

What else? Well, Axel Wilkinson, a long-time remote colleague and (I’d like to say) friend of mine from the States is arriving in Norwich tomorrow morning. He should be in the air right now, in fact. He’s always been one of our most supportive customers, testers and community members at FXhome, as evidence by him winning a community-voted award in 2009. Great guy and I’m really looking forward to meeting him and working with him face-to-face for the first time while he’s here on a consultancy basis next week.

Currently pondering projects: my three at the moment are Evinden, Of Rock And Earth and Arms Race. Here’s their current status:

Evinden: First draft complete, currently with Slava and Nadia for some feedback. Regardless of when that feedback arrives, I’ll be moving into the second draft as soon as my other book hits first draft…

Of Rock And Earth: Three quarters towards a first draft. Slow going due to going back to work and being distracted by the likes of Dragon Age and Uncharted 2, but I’m hoping to accelerate progress soon. Which won’t be easy once I hit February and go skiing for a week. Anyway, this is my current main priority – need to get a first draft finished so I can go back to Evinden, as well as try my hand at some short stories.

Arms Race: Edit just begun, opening sequence complete in rough form. Hope to have a VERY rough first draft by the end of next week, ready for some extreme tightening. We can then identify and start work on the VFX shots.

Busy weekend coming up, meanwhile, which is never good for creative projects: Axeman arrives, we’re out for a meal with friends on Saturday, and off to my parents on Sunday. Plus we have to fit in buying skiing equipment at some point.

Right, Nadia’s busy stabbing hurlocks (evil things in Dragon Age, not the fat guy from Lost), so I think I’ll do some novel writing!

158,380 words. 425 pages. 1st draft complete.

A handful of minutes ago I complete the first draft of Evinden, the novel I’ve been working on for the last nine-or-so years (about six of which involved the main writing part). It’s taken me far longer than it should have and there’s still work to be done to fill in some plot holes and tidy things up…but the main work is done. The body of the story is there, from start to finish.

It’s a proper novel. 158,380 words isn’t too shabby, really. It’s a real book!

Can’t quite form coherent thoughts about the experience of completion at this point, perhaps because I’m aware that it won’t be even vaguely publishable until the third draft. An important milestone nonetheless. I have to admit to being a teensy weensy bit proud.

And quite a bit scared.

132,163 and counting

Yes, I’m still writing the book.

Yes, I passed my second self-imposed deadline a very, very long time ago.

What can I say? I’ve been busy! Vegas, Derbyshire and now moving house. Which is gradually moving along – had a couple of viewings today which seemed to go OK, another couple tomorrow. Fingers crossed that somebody wants our house!

Anyway, I have been writing still and this last couple of weeks I’ve really started to ramp things up again. I’ve broken through the 130k mark and I’m nearing the end of Part 3. Part 4 is the climactic battle, so should be a) shorter and b) easier to write that the previous parts. Then there’s a little epilogue bit on the end, and then…it’s done!

Exciting stuff, to be at the battle at last. I’ve changed the structure of Part 4 around quite considerably and I’m not 100% sure it’s going to work, but we shall see. Once the first complete draft is done I’m going to go back immediately and re-write the early chapters to make sure Tarn’s appearance in the story makes sense with regard to some of the latter changes I’ve made, then I’m going to take a break for a while before doing a third draft, at which point I’ll distribute to some willing victims.

Gettting there.

93,620 words

I’ve decided to make this blog entirely about my writing efforts, which currently are focused on Evinden. This should make everything far more purposeful, rather than every post drifting about aimlessly as they have for the last couple of years. I imagine it’ll also result in my posting for more regularly – which hopefully will in turn encourage me to keep writing the book with more regularity.

So, what’s the current status?

  • 93,620 words
  • 243 bookish pages
  • Current chapter title: Bridge over Green Water

I started writing with renewed vigour a week-or-two back. After the extreme distractions of the FXhome tutorial project, Prague and Christmas, at last I’m back ‘in the zone’. This is thanks largely to Chris Burdett, who pointed me in the direction of NaNoWriMo, a challenge I find most tempting. Of course, attempting to write a 50,000 word novel in November isn’t going to be possible if Evinden isn’t already finished, hence my determination to get a first draft by the end of February.

And, for once, I don’t think that target is unrealistic. I’m at a turning point in the story where the characters finally reach the place they’ve been travelling towards for the last 100 pages. Once they get there the pace cranks up considerably as the whole place prepares for war, with the story expanding from a small group of travellers to the movements of armies. It acts as a major pacing and tone shift and I’m quite excited about finally getting to it.

First, though, I need to rewrite the last few pages, which involved a nasty tentacled beastie attacking a major character. Having completed this action sequence I realised, rather late, that it would be far more effective if the creature was attacking one of the other primary characters. Typical!

49 days left.